CREATIVE WRITING THREAD VERSION 3

I TOLD YOU NOT TO DELETE THE THREAD BUT YOU DID AND PAID THED PRICE DIDN'T YOU ZIRO. NEAXT TIME YOU BETTER DO WHAT I SAY. REMEMBER, THIS NOT YOUR FORUM. YOU WERE BANED FOR A WEEK.I BE YOU'RE CRYING NOW. WELL WHAT EVER. YOU BANNED ME FROM YOUR SITE SO NAAH!

post any poems and stories you have written here. thank you

im tired of saying my poems over and over again my fingers fuckin hurt

sorry. that's ziro's fault. he deleted all the creative writing threads when i asked him not to. right when i made creative writing v. 2.0 he deleted it and so now we have this one

fine here are the poems i had

the incubus song
I WISH YOU WERE HERE
I dig my toes into the sand
the ocean looks like a thousand diamonds streamed across a blue plain
i lean against the wind
pretend that i am weightless
and in this moment i am happy
i wish you were here
i lay my head into the sand
thse sky sky resermbles a black lit canopy with holes punched in it
im counting ufos
i signle them with my ladder
and in this moment i am happy
i wish you were hear i wish you were here

now i cant find my book so im just goin to make one up

THE STAPPLE
i cant remember who i am
or where i come from

i am oddly deseving
you cant play the victim this time

i am in the presence of my four fathers
they stay with me
and stapple me whole again

nice stuff

the first one is a incubus song i just like sayin it

you should put some of your stuff in here babe

ok

My Suicide

The day is now dark
The sky is now black
I lay on my bed
My body now numb
My essence is draining
Dripping out of my wrists
My heart barely
the world getting small
My lungs are restricted
My time now has come
It all will be over
My pain will be gone
I feel my life leaving
I'm dying tonight
I cut my wrists
My suicide

Just to let ya'll know im not suicidal its just sumthin i wrote

that was very good and impressive. brava.
i have a question though. does the suicide sybolize something like love or did you litterally mean kill yourself

ummm thatz a good question ummm i dunno

maybe like someone is goin through a tough break up or something like that

yea i dunno it just like hit me

well wahtever it means it is still very good. i was never that good at writing poetry.i was better at writing stories

welll post some

i don't have em with me. i just did em for school and everyone said they were really good.

yu wrote them for school? do you have creative writing? thats what i wanted to take i wanted to learn to write a better type of poetry

no i wrote them like in 5th grade and stuff. i have WC. i have already told you that

well im so sorry i didnt remember cause one day your takin about one subject then a nother and a nothe r its just confusing

genie, you are a good poet. i can't write good like you.

my writing wasn't always that good and its only occasional i get sumthin good like that

those are good

the me and we thing was ok but i have to ask

my hair is dyed
my skirt is tight
i fuck each night

blonde bimbo i needed opposites

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